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January 9th, 2008, 03:41 AM
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OK, here?s the ORIGINAL Chapter 6, Abby and I had planned and already written to follow on Chap 5 (Marie managing to kill Katja) ? but then instead decided to write & post the earlier alternative ? (see reasons in the reply below to this) ?
Please note that the usual DISCLAIMERS apply: this is erotic, adult fantasy intended for open-minded people * includes extreme violence, death and sex.
Hope you enjoy this ending as much, IF NOT MORE as the previous ? please let us have your opinion ? your comments are always greatly appreciated ?
Meaow
Jessie & Abby
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ASSASSIN ISLAND, Chapter 6: JESSIKA?S REVENGE (ORIGINAL)
By Jessika and Abby
As a stunned Marie lay groggy a few feet away, Jessie knelt down next to Katja's lifeless body. She kissed her softly on the lips and swore to her lover not only vengeance, but that Marie would suffer like none of her other victims ever have.
Consumed by a lava flow of fury, Jessika reached down and picked Marie up by her neck and slammed her into a tree. She kept the little whore upright against the tree trunk with her left hand, while her right tightened into a massive fist. She ripped off Marie's shocking pink half bra and began her maniacal assault. She pulverized the blonde's slight body with thunderous, brutal punches.......
Soon Marie's firm, small breasts became rounded, swollen, discolored masses. Jessika's fists then hammered the blonde's belly, turning her flat, firm little tummy into a cauldron of pain as each succeeding fist sank deeper and deeper into the blonde's yielding, softening belly. She pummeled the young slut's hairless cunt mound and delighted at attempting to bury her big fist right up into Marie's pink-lipped slit.
The blonde was taking a horrific, other-worldly beating, moaning, grunting, "ooof-ing" and "ugh-ing" in response to every crushing punch. Her doll-like body shook wildly in response to each blistering fist that landed until finally, Jessika let her fall to the grass-covered ground.
Jessika stood back and admired her handiwork as a tear-filled, gasping, pain-wracked blonde lay at her feet, curled up and writhing, one hand pawing at her cunt, the other gripping her belly. The redhead removed her black bra and panties in preparation for what joyousness was to come. She played lazily with her breasts, tweaking her aroused nipples, and ran her finger lightly over the stud in her pierced, swollen clit.
"I won't kill her yet, Katja." The redhead bellowed. "She hasn't suffered nearly enough........."
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Mr. A was enraptured watching Jessika destroy the tiny collegiate whore. While he had his hands full of Rosalia's hair, roughly forcing her mouth to continue to minister to his burgeoning cocaine-infused, viagra-fueled cock, he shouted commands to Martin.
"Show me that last cunt punch ..... the uppercut between Marie's wide spread thighs...... AGAIN MARTIN.....NOW......and then in SLO-MOTION........YESSSSSSSSS !! Good Martin, VERY good. And GIVE ME MORE VOLUME....and some belly punch replays.......I want to really hear those "oooooomphs !! ".
He was near cumming.....Rosalia could hardly breathe.... and was in pain as he began pulling out some of her hair......... He demanded a replay of a particular gut-buster......"ZOOM in Martin....that punch just beneath Marie's navel......"
The blonde's croaking "OOOUUUFFFFF" filled the communications room as Jessie's fist dug deep into her soft belly. "NOW the one where she gets it low.....when Jessika slugs her just above her pussy mound !! THAT'S IT JESSIKA, GUT THE YOUNG TRAMP !! "
And then every screen in the room went BLANK !!
Mr. A began screaming his chief engineer. He sank his fingers into Rosalia's face and shoved her head from his cock. Not expecting the sudden jolt, Rosalia's teeth scraped his penis as her head was violently pushed back. More enraged, he slapped her viciously across the face and knocked her to the floor.
His cock went quickly limp. He grabbed it with his hands, rubbing it's softened, shortened length in a futile attempt to get it erect. "MARTIN.......WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON ????? " He skinned his dick with his furious stroking. His cock turned completely soft and kept shrinking, and like the head of a frightened turtle, appeared to recede into his lower belly. He was beyond furious.
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Jessika picked up the still convulsing Marie, grabbed her by the neck and held her off the ground. Marie brought her hands up to Jessika's wrists, pulling, scratching, and clawing in a futile attempt to free her throat. Her legs began kicking out in every direction, and one foot thudded into Jessie's auburn curl-covered cunt mound.
The enraged redhead barely flinched. "You little slut. you couldn't hurt me if you did that 1,000 times......" She tossed the dazed, beaten blonde a few feet to the left. Marie flew through the air like a rag doll that had just been tossed aside by a fickle child wanting a new toy. She landed with a thud on the upper thighs of Katja's supine, inert body. Jessika stopped to think of how she would subject Marie to the ultimate in suffering....... and how she would eventually kill her.
The fury-filled killer spotted and picked up a jagged, grapefruit-sized rock. "PURRFECT ! " She decided. "I'll break EVERY bone in her body with this rock.....she'll suffer and suffer and SUFFER SOME MORE until she BEGS me to kill her...... then after she's mindless with pain, I'll crush her skull....... Yes, that'll be just PURRRFECT....."
Jessika's already sopping pussy began pulsate with intense anticipation. She felt heat emanate from her excited cunt and spread outward, radiating pleasurably through her belly and thighs. The nipples of her large, beautiful breasts began to enlarge and stiffen. She knew that the excitement of THIS kill would be the most thrilling EVER ? motivated not only by sadistic lust by her thirst for revenge.
Jessie picked up the rock and walked slowly towards Marie who had slipped off of Katja's legs, and now lay face down next to her. She stopped before she smashed her rock into the prone, beaten body of Marie, and thought of Katja and the pleasures they eagerly, lustfully shared. Her youthful, enchanting body....that was until a few awful minutes ago so vibrant.....so very lovely.....had excited her like no other lover before her.
But then reality reared it's ugly head as she longingly stared at her lover's broken body......Rage consumed Jessika and she trembled as she eyed Katja's still form.....her head twisted grotesquely to one side....her eyes wide open, staring blindly at the cloudless sky, frozen in a horrible death stare ..... her belly savaged ...... her nipples split open.... her clit ruined .......
She had her plan. "First, I'll splinter her fingers and toes.....then break her limbs......NO.....First I'm going to shatter her fucking pubic bone into a thousand pieces........" She stared down at the wretched blonde girl. "Roll over Marie, I need to plant a little kiss on your pretty little cunt." She bent down and grabbed the demolished blonde's right shoulder and turned her over while she raised the rock above her head. "This is for Katja, you worthless scum-sucking slut......."
"AAUUUGGGGHHHHH !! " An inhuman shriek exploded out of Jessika's mouth. Her brain was momentarily dumbfounded..... shocked completely still.
Marie had managed to pull the bamboo spike from Katja's belly and keep it hidden beneath her body until Jessika reached down to turn her over. Thrust up as Jessika was raising the rock above her head, the wicked wooden stake sliced between her legs and made a wet, sickening sound as it tore through her cunt, creating a frightful wound. The auburn haired assassin's mind screamed in silence.
"MY GOD... OOOHHHHHH.......NOOOOOOOO........HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN..........I'M INCVIIIIIINCIBLE.............HOW COULD THIS LITTLE BITCH ............NOOOOOOOOO ................ MY GAWWWWD...... MY PRECIOUS PUUSSSSSYYYYYYYYY......!!! "
The redhead felt her legs go wobbly as she looked down in unbelievable pain at her skewered sex. Her eyes bulged white in utter disbelief ........... fucked by bamboo phallus driven right between her cunt lips..... it's jagged point puncturing her womb........ She felt warm blood trail down the insides of her thighs as she sank slowly to her knees and pitched forward. The disbelief turned to dismay as her face and chest hit the ground.
Marie rolled a groaning, distraught Jessika over on her back and stood over her, taunting: "BITCH, you stopped me from cumming on your dead partner's face. I guess you couldn't wait to take her place, huh?".
The auburn haired woman shook her head violently from side to side as the blonde got to her knees and then shoved her naked, hairless pussy into her face. Marie began to feverishly grind her victorious cunt across Jessika's entire face, covering it with a slick, clear layer of warm, intimate fluids. She grabbed the sides of Jessie's head to keep her from thrashing it about as she maintained a steady rhythmic motion, keeping her clit rubbing solidly against Jessika's forehead as she rode the redhead closer and closer to climax.
Jessika threw her fists into Marie's flanks and back, but her blows lacked power. The young blonde then turned completely around so that while still fucking the redhead's face, she could see her outstretched body before her. She began smashing her flattened tits with her fists, crushing them against her ribs, and demolishing the "yin" nipple rings, driving pieces of them into Jessie's soft tit-flesh.
Jessika yelled out in agony as the broken jewelry made an unholy mess of her nipples. Marie's hips began to buck faster. She plucked the sapphire roughly out of Jessika's belly and watched delightedly as blood quickly filled her navel and then began to slowly trickle over the surrounding flesh.
Marie started to scream in exquisite pleasure and her body began to tremble as an eruption of pleasure engulfed her. Her orgasm was so powerful, so intense, her vaginal walls contracting with such force, that as the first wave of her climax mushroomed, a hot spray of vaginal juices shot out of her pussy, splashing across Jessika's face.
"AAARRRGGGGHH" You fucking CUNT." Jessika shouted as she was splattered by the ejaculating blonde. She grabbed Marie's hips and tried to throw her off. Marie, on an adrenalin-fueled, pride-filled sexual rush, reached out and drove her fist down into Jessika's belly and started to grind away again.
Just for the hell of it, she reached forward and slammed a second, third and fourth punch.... all to the redhead's unprotected cunt and mound. Jessika cried out wildly as a mushroom cloud of agony exploded form her already tortured pussy. Marie did a double take when the knuckles from her last cunt-busting fist felt something hard. "Another pussy jewel " She thought. Jessika shrieked as the sapphire clit-stud was driven into her excited, pulverized most intimate flesh.
Marie kept gyrating. "I'm gonna CUM AGAIN........ in your FACE, BITCH ........ OOOOHHHHH......it's so close...I can feel it.....oooh.....GOD......I'm cumming...........I'm CUMMMMMING........AAAHHHH..... YESSS... YEESSS........Moments later, as her quaking body was about to explode, the little blonde lost all control.....including that of her bladder........YEEESSSSSSSSSSSS !!!!! Her final exultation was accompanied by a stream of warm piss that drenched Jessika's shocked and humiliated face.
"Ooops....sorry.......I didn't mean to do that." Marie giggled, perhaps from a nanosecond's worth of embarrassment. Her laughter quickly faded. "But then again, maybe that's just what you fucking DESERVE, you crazy-assed bitch. Marie began shouting at the top of her lungs. "Fucking slut, you were trying to KILL ME !! You wanted to BEAT me to death.....or slice me open......and WHY????? For a few bucks and some hot, wet humps.......and because you and you dead friend over there are sadistic LUNATIC BITCHES......... Well I'll show you some sadism."
Jessika wailed in agony as Marie bounded off her face and yanked the bamboo out of her butchered cunt. Blood and bits of gore ran over and through the redhead's hands that clutched desperately at her crotch. "You Bitch.....you little slut........" Jessie spat between cries of pain.
"Don't you wish you were as smooth and pretty as I am? " Marie asked mockingly, as she stood with her feet wide on either side of the redhead's shoulders. "LOOK UP, JESSIKA.......TAKE A GOOD LOOK AT THE PUSSY THAT KILLED YOU !! "
Jessika grabbed the backs of Marie's knees and pulled. The blonde lost her balance and fell. From her back, Jessie threw a punch into the side of Marie's head, over her right ear, but in her weakened condition, the blow had little impact.
A spent Jessie groaned helplessly. Marie picked up the bamboo weapon, and as if she was killing a vampire, turned and rammed a downward thrust for the center of the redhead's chest. Jessika raised her hands and caught the blonde's wrist before she could plunge the stake between her breasts. The spike's downward movement was deflected to one side, it's bloody tip scraping a shallow gash over the ribs on Jessika's left side.
Marie tossed the bamboo aside and reached for the redhead's discarded bra. She wrapped it quickly around Jessika's neck and looked straight into her eyes as she pulled tight with every bit of strength still at her disposal.
Jessika began to thrash and kick.......her hands flew to her throat, her eyes locked onto the face of this tiny blonde....a face half grinning and half twisted in rage. "OOOHHH NOOOOOOO......I CAN'T DIIIIIEEEE.........." Her pain-filled bleeding body began to shudder and scream as Marie kept the makeshift garrote digging into her neck.
A terror-stricken Jessika felt her powerful body betray her for the first and only time. She felt a rolling blaze burning inside her....searing her lungs....spreading throughout her shuddering, failing body. Fear and terror turned to mindless panic as she felt her windpipe snap.
Through the shock and overwhelming dread she felt strange sensations in her ravaged crotch....She gurgled and her tongue started protruding..... then gave a helpless gasp as an orgasm rose up from her bloody groin, it's pleasurable sensations rushing through her quivering body, fighting through the searing pain in her chest as her lungs cried out for air.
Marie shook as well in erotic excitement as she watched the life slowly, inexorably forced from Jessika's body. Her hands pulled even harder on the twisted bra. Jessika's arms fell softly to her sides, her shuddering slowed and finally stopped. She gave one last gurgle as she went mercifully limp, with a sudden, arching spurt of yellow piss as her bladder released embarrassingly.
Smirking triumphantly Marie spread the dead woman's pussy lips and removed the sparkling stud that had escaped unscathed, despite the savagery done by her fists and the bamboo cock. It was her last degradation of Jessika's defeated body. She collected all of her prized jewels, modestly put her pink thong back on, and headed slowly to the guard station near the airstrip.
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More limp than Jessika's body was Mr A's dick as he raged about his communications room, threatening, among other things, to castrate his chief engineer. As he paced frantically about, his path crossed with a frightened, naked, shivering Rosalia who was hiding beneath a desk.
He dragged her out from under her cover and stomped down hard, driving the heel of his booted foot deeply into her soft belly. As she "oooomphed" and her legs bent reflexively up towards her chest, he kicked out again, his foot crashing frighteningly into her exposed pussy. The sound she made was indescribable as he continued to storm about, ranting at ear-shattering volume.
Mercifully for all present, but especially for Rosalia and for Martin, the HD monitors came to life again, and Mr A's jaw dropped as he saw Marie, her tiny body trembling with massive amounts adrenalin still flowing through her veins, standing victoriously over Jessika's corpse.
"My LORD !! Martin, zoom in on the blonde !! " Marie's diminutive, naked body filled the screen. The small hemispheres of her purpled breasts still heaved......her slender, hideously bruised belly bulged in and out like a bellows in concert with her deep breathing. " My God her tits are PERFECT. She's BEAUTIFUL ! " He cried, as he felt little twinges in his shriveled cock.
The man was shocked, his brain stunned..... his mind swirling in a whirlpool of amazement and conflict. How, he thought, could an untrained wisp ....... a harmless looking college girl defeat his trained killer-bitches ??? As he stumbled and flailed his arms, he finally blurted out. "My prized assassins.... My GOD ......THEY'RE GONE !!??"
"Katja, my ruthless amazon.......the first to fall.......you CAN'T be dead...........but you ARE......you took it in the belly...... GOT IT RIGHT IN YOUR BEAUTIFUL BELLY !!........then your delicate neck...... BROKEN !!!.............. And now Jessika......YOU TOO??!!!!??"
He thought back to the look on Katja's face.... the close up.... her eyes saucer-wide in disbelief, her mouth gaping open as her guts were shredded.......
And now THIS UTTER SHOCK, Jessika lying lifeless and bloody.....This was UNIMAGINABLE... and he MISSED IT !!!!!!........Jessika....her awesome strength....her twisted, sadistic mind......her powerful body...... lying DEAD at Marie's feet......a hideous wound between her legs......HOW ON EARTH...... ?????.... His cock jumped to attention again as he studied Jessika's & Katja's dead, butchered bodies.
He began to ramble in a stream of delirious consciousness. " Ric......Roberto......MY LORD.....UNBELIEVABLE !!....... Roberto, grab two clean-up guys and bag their bodies ........ We'll bury them in the ocean......they'll appreciate that.......Damn, that little blonde bitch is SO GOOD! ... This is the BEST, MOST AMAZING HUNT YET ... couldn't have scripted it better ... can't believe how HOT it was to see Katja killed .......and Jessika..... I MUST SEE HOW THE REDHEAD BOUGHT IT !!! ARE YOU LISTENING, MARTIN !?!?....... Maybe I should offer Marie a job ... there's nothing my money can't buy...."
He wrapped his hands gently around his cock which was now protruding from his lower gut like a thick flag pole....and without even trying, sprayed his hot seed all over the control console beneath his main HD monitor.
He calmed down slightly as his orgasm subsided. "Rosalia, get dressed. You and Vanessa .... take a jeep and get me Marie.....I MUST TALK TO HER.....I HAVE to know how she DID IT......I've got to know ALL THE GORY DETAILS !!!.....bring her a uniform.....I want to see how she looks in khaki !! Ric, you and Roberto, get moving.......and Rosalia, bring me that miniature blonde dynamo !! "
TO BE CONTINUED ?
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January 9th, 2008, 03:42 AM
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Inactive Member
The reason we posted the alternative 2 chapters was that most people (including Marie and Katja for that matter) seemed to be expecting Marie to eliminate me too ? so we decided to SURPRISE them with me killing Marie ? and also brought in Janet in the last chapter ?
Meaow
Jessie
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January 9th, 2008, 02:16 PM
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HB Forum Owner
AWESOME!!!! That was GREAT, LOVED IT!! *hugs poor Jessika* Well, atleast you went out lezzing... lol! Honestly, GREAT work by both of you, am really anxious to see the rest of the alternate ending.
MikeJV
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January 11th, 2008, 02:43 PM
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Abbyfan
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Thanks Mike !!
The "Original" Chapter 7 should be posted sometime Saturday......
Abbyfan ( and Jessika )
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